New fanfiction advice!?

Okay, I'm writing a new naruto fanfic and I'm adding my own OC, Iya, and she'll be the main character. What I'm having trouble on is her background. Here's them in a quick summary.


A)


Iya's the princess of a kingdom that's living in a 'Golden Age.' Her parents have been keeping a secret from everyone, including Iya, that they're demons But that secrets found out and they're people begin to rebel and tries to kill the royal family because they don't want to be controled by monsters. The king, in an attempt to keep their race alive, freezes Iya so that she'll wake up years later and carry on their bloodline. She'll be closer to Naruto in this one.


B)


Iya, being a princess, is isolated from the rest of the world and like in a story, a rebellion starts to from. She has to witness her family and friends being killed and is scarred for life. She buries them all and can no longer act like a normal child and is emotionally withdrawn. She'll be closere to Sasuke in this one.





So which?New fanfiction advice!?
ooh! i love fanfiction net!!!! i have my own account and everything! i think... that A would be good. there would be more suspense and would have a good plot if you fix it up and add more! hope this helps!New fanfiction advice!?
B





it sounds more cooler ^^

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